Demonstrate the ability to approach writing as a recursive process that requires substantial revision of drafts for content, organization, and clarity (global revision), as well as editing and proofreading (local revision).

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GNnCVDRVsVUle9AnqrtbLgBl9XrEGnjGszTZb2JL7cc/edit?usp=sharing

Final Draft Project 1 –

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dsJNoaftj8qZI0LBjN0dY-p9oGtjt5Rxk7gDGIfkv5A/edit?usp=sharing

Project 2- Draft

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KAg5-xC31gRnmBbdBfnzHY1f31ioEFjYfC14R_LMKT8/edit?usp=sharing

Project 2- Final Draft

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14Co7AmDF6T-Vnb8CYpkW3vn4PjWEx4mkZJ8WU9wJW_Y/edit?usp=sharing

Project 3- Draft

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ORQVS7M5pygZTTW0YUxaRtYZ7KTVAyrlpFq0U9IsqTs/edit?usp=sharing

Project 3- Final

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f9gGioSmDWFUnHtN0626oRWYPA8op8QTd4Sahu0SaDg/edit?usp=sharing

Looking back on my first and final draft can help improve the voice and language used in my future papers. When reflecting over the specific changes global and local I have made a good amount of progress when it comes to making revisions even in general. In my writing prior, I was never good at revising my paper and making constructive changes to strengthen my final draft. Now being able to point out specific types of revisions, when doing peer review in class I am able to point out those changes in my paper as well as the paper I am peer reviewing. Before coming to this class, I never fully understood the helpfulness of those comments and how they could strengthen my paper. Now being able to take the revisions from Professor Center along with my peer’s comments I have been able to build my writing from my first and final draft. In my paper 2, I believe that I had a strong draft and revising that made me have a strong final draft. Something different that we did in paper 2 that I believe helped me was the sentence outline. This helped with the structure of my paper and how I could visualize how it’d look before finishing my paper. When looking at the specific revisions made in my paper 2 draft, I was missing a lot of evidence that could strengthen my argument. In this paper specifically I challenged myself by making an argument that most people would disagree with. Since the point I was trying to make was somewhat confusing the revisions that Professor Center and my peer revisor left was helpful since it was another point of view. Using what they say and what they think could strengthen the argument, it could help how other people could be able to understand the point I was trying to make.